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Brand voice · Fintech

How a fintech startup should sound

Three voice traits, real before and after rewrites, and a word list, all shown for Lumen Pay, our sample fintech brand. Use it to write your own one-page voice guide.

Define my voice freeSee the rewrites
PAYMENT SCREEN
Woohoo! Your transaction was processed successfully!
₹12,480 received. It will reach your bank by 6 pm.
Same message. Different brand.

Three traits, three rules

A trait without a rule is just an adjective. Each trait below comes with the rule writers follow.

Trusted

Say what happens to the money, every time.

Precise

Use exact numbers and dates, never "soon".

Calm

No exclamation marks near balances.

FormalCasual
SeriousPlayful
TechnicalPlain

Where Lumen Pay sits on three common voice scales.

Before and after

The fastest way to teach a voice is to rewrite real lines. Here are three moments every fintech startup writes.

Payment screen
BEFOREWoohoo! Your transaction was processed successfully!
LUMEN PAY VOICE₹12,480 received. It will reach your bank by 6 pm.
Error message
BEFOREOops! Something went wrong.
LUMEN PAY VOICEWe could not reach your bank. Your money is safe. Try again in 2 minutes.
Homepage
BEFORERevolutionary payment solutions for the future.
LUMEN PAY VOICEGet paid by UPI today. Get credit for stock tomorrow.

The word list

Words we use

receivedsettledby 6 pmfeesafe

Words we avoid

revolutionaryoopsinstant*guaranteed returns
Why

Banks and big wallets own navy, royal blue and purple. A new name in those colours looks like a copy. The way you write is the cheapest way to sound different.

Questions

What tone of voice suits a fintech brand?

For our sample brand Lumen Pay: trusted, precise, calm. Pick three traits that are true for you, each with a one-line rule.

How do I write a brand voice guide?

Choose three traits, write a rule for each, show before and after rewrites, and list words to use and avoid. One page is enough to start.

Where should brand voice show up first?

Your homepage headline, product messages like errors and confirmations, and your pitch deck titles.

Does Astitva define brand voice?

Yes. Astitva writes your tone of voice as part of your brand strategy and records it in your brand book. New accounts get 50 free credits.

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Astitva writes your tone of voice as part of your brand strategy, then uses it in your brand book and pitch deck.

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