Three formulas, three lines
Every tagline below was written for Ochre Studio, which makes handloom contemporary womenswear. Try all three formulas for your own startup, then keep the strongest.
What the customer gets, in a few words.
4 words
What you do that the usual option does not.
5 words
A short commitment you keep every time.
6 words
The competitor swap test
Put a competitor's name in front of your line. If it still makes sense, it is not yours yet.
Any fashion company could say this.
Also weak: “Style that speaks”
Specific to what Ochre Studio does, so a competitor could not borrow it without changing their product.
See it with the logo
A tagline lives under or beside the logo, never inside it. Here is Ochre Studio's line on light, dark and on the woven label.
Check it before you print it
Fashion sites default to black and white. Without a point of view, the label is forgettable. Your tagline is where you say the opposite out loud.
Questions
What makes a good tagline for a fashion startup?
It says something only you can say, in three to seven words. For example: "Handloom, cut for now."
What is the competitor swap test?
Put a competitor's name in front of your tagline. If it still works, your tagline is too generic.
Should a tagline go in my logo?
Keep it as a separate line under or beside the logo, so the logo still works on its own at small sizes.
Can Astitva write my tagline?
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