Three formulas, three lines
Every tagline below was written for Safarnama, which makes curated small-group trips in the Himalaya. Try all three formulas for your own startup, then keep the strongest.
What the customer gets, in a few words.
4 words
What you do that the usual option does not.
4 words
A short commitment you keep every time.
6 words
The competitor swap test
Put a competitor's name in front of your line. If it still makes sense, it is not yours yet.
Any travel company could say this.
Also weak: “Your journey begins here”
Specific to what Safarnama does, so a competitor could not borrow it without changing their product.
See it with the logo
A tagline lives under or beside the logo, never inside it. Here is Safarnama's line on light, dark and on the trip brochure.
Check it before you print it
Travel sites default to turquoise beaches and sunset gradients. Your tagline is where you say the opposite out loud.
Questions
What makes a good tagline for a travel startup?
It says something only you can say, in three to seven words. For example: "Small groups. Big Himalaya."
What is the competitor swap test?
Put a competitor's name in front of your tagline. If it still works, your tagline is too generic.
Should a tagline go in my logo?
Keep it as a separate line under or beside the logo, so the logo still works on its own at small sizes.
Can Astitva write my tagline?
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